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June 26th, 2009 by tinakamo

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Harris Burdick gave this photo the caption:

“His heart was pounding. He was sure he had seen the doorknob turn.”

Posted in Chris Van Allsburg, General Discussion, Literature Discussions, Writing | 11 Comments »

11 Responses

  1. Kana'i Says:

    HI Mrs. Nakamoto. I haven’t seen or heard from you in a while. I am so glad to finally be able to blog. Hopefully I can come down to the elementary once in a while and be able to see the kids. Have a great summer!!!!

  2. Cayli Rose Says:

    May I start the story?
    he could hardly breathe
    he heard the dornod turn and suddenly his dog started whimpering after a whole hour of barking he had heard the stair s creeking.
    BOOM…

  3. Cayli Rose Says:

    By dornod I meant door nob.

  4. Cayli Rose Says:

    I’ll continue even though I started.
    The stomping of a murder vibraded
    He looked.
    He screamed.
    He looked again.
    He had left the door open and a cat came in.
    There was nothing to worry about.
    The next day he woke up.
    He looked around.
    He opened his eyes wide.
    Everything was broken.
    the door nob was no where to be seen.
    There musst have been a robber.
    Unless…

  5. Cayli Rose Says:

    anyone home?
    I am blogging all by my self!
    I have 4 comments in a row and I am so lonley 🙁

  6. Cayli Rose Says:

    Hey everyone,
    Jane is sleeping over at my house tonight.
    Here is what she says:So hi everyone.Today was the bestest day ever,
    hanging at the park,eating chinese food,
    watching tv,and now am blogging.
    Cayli told me a story about these dogs that had fangs.Well heres cayli:
    Well I saw Jane telling you the story so I should finish it up.
    So I went to my auntys house and there were two other roads and 1 had a dead end an the oher one went to the main road.
    I went down the one with the dead end and then my freind was like Watch out for the dogs so I went down an I almost bumped into a house then I went into a driveway and guess what happened Then?
    These gigantic dogs came charging at me!
    They started hissing and the had fangs that matched the size of their bodies I started backing of because I didn’t Know how far the leash went right?
    My eyes started getting big ang I started screaming and guess what my freind did?
    He started laughing and I ran after him and yeled at him and
    Wait!
    I am sooo sorry.
    I forgot to tell you what I was riding!
    it was my bike so I grabed it an ran for my life.
    That was the scaryest time of my life and it was just a couple days ago!
    Thats all for now.
    BYE!

  7. Cayli Rose Says:

    Hey again everyone!
    Guess what I got?
    A new tv!
    My other tv was better cause it was bigger.
    but this tv’s scree is much more clear and for some reason the picture looks closer.
    Our other tv was fat!
    I saw a fire yester day.
    Trst me.
    It wasn’t a barbecue.
    I had three sleep overs in a rowand they were all with different people in my house.
    my last person sleeping over at my house is still here.
    Bye.

  8. Cayli Rose Says:

    Hey Guys,
    Uh,
    Dose anyone Know who their teacher is gonna be?

  9. Kristin Says:

    Hey Cayli I’m in Kumu Kaapana’s class. I found out Wednesday night. I wish Mrs. Nakamoto moved up a grade with us and was our third grade Teacher 🙁 🙁 !! I had three sleepovers too but I slept over at my Grandma’s house with my cousin for 2 days and my Aunty’s house for one day.

  10. Brycen Says:

    THERE were tigers everywhere
    but the tigers left before he
    knew it. the next day all of
    the glass broke. He went for a
    drive but his car was nowhere
    to be found…

  11. caylirose Says:

    you mean he wanted to go for a drive 🙂

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