Period Three, below the original post you will find the fixes you submitted. Look at them; critique them. Are they better? Do they address the problems in the original post? Do they create new ones? Take a look.<\/p>\n
Original Post–Problematic Section:<\/strong><\/p>\n Upon further research, the Toxic Cosmetics Ingredients List claims that Bronopol \u201ccauses allergic contact dermatitis.\u201d \u201cAllergic contact dermatitis is caused by a reaction to substances called allergens that come into contact with your skin\u201d a quote from the American Academy of Dermatology.<\/em><\/p>\n Fix 1<\/strong> Upon further research, the Toxic Cosmetics Ingredients List claims that Bronopol is harmful: \u201ccauses allergic contact dermatitis.\u201d \u00a0The American Academy of Dermatology states facts about allergens and skin problems: \u201cAllergic contact dermatitis is caused by a reaction to substances called allergens that come into contact with your skin\u201d.<\/p>\n Fix 2<\/strong> Upon further research, the Toxic Cosmetics, Ingredients List claims that Bronopol \u201ccauses allergic contact dermatitis.\u201d The American Academy of Dermatology states, “Allergic contact dermatitis is caused by a reaction to substances called allergens that come into contact with your skin.”<\/p>\n Fix 3<\/strong> Upon further research, the Toxic Cosmetics Ingredients List claims that Bronopol \u201ccauses allergic contact dermatitis.\u201d A quote from the American Academy of Dermatology,\u201cAllergic contact dermatitis is caused by a reaction to substances called allergens that come into contact with your skin\u201d.<\/p>\n Fix 4<\/strong> Upon further research, the Toxic Cosmetics Ingredients List claims that Bronopol \u201ccauses allergic contact dermatitis.\u201d The American Academy of Dermatology states, \u201cAllergic contact dermatitis is caused by a reaction to substances called allergens that come into contact with your skin.\u201d<\/p>\n Fix 5<\/strong> The Toxic Cosmetics Ingredients List claims: \u201cBronopol, causes allergic contact dermatitis\u201d, and a quote from the American Academy of Dermatology states: \u201cAllergic contact dermatitis is caused by a reaction to substances called allergens that come into contact with your skin\u201d.<\/p>\n THE BEST FIXES: <\/strong><\/p>\n <\/strong>1. Upon further research, the Toxic Cosmetics Ingredients list claims that Bronopol “causes allergic contact dermatitis,” a reaction to allergens that come in contact with the skin, according to the American Academy of Dermatology.<\/p>\n 2. Upon further research, the Toxic Cosmetics Ingredients List claims that Bronopol \u201ccauses allergic contact dermatitis.\u201d which, according to the American Academy of Dermatology, is a \u201creaction to substances called allergens that come into contact with your skin.\u201d<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" Period Three, below the original post you will find the fixes you submitted. Look at them; critique them. Are they better? Do they address the problems in the original post? Do they create new ones? Take a look. Original Post–Problematic … Continue reading