As poem makers, we absorb like sponges, see things in a different way, and use 4-D to absorb EVERYTHING inside and outside. These are metaphors that students wrote, which I believe must be shared with everyone!!
Love
Love is the wind, so calm and so rough.-Kanekoa Love is a rainbow, that lets your favorite colors come to life.-Cuinn Love is a rainbow that gives the world color.-Maka’ala Love is a sail on a sailboat because it guides you.-Blake Love is the wind. A cool breeze similar to a blanket wrapped around you.-Kahuwai Love is the wind because it blows away your troubles.-Paige Love is a rainbow that shelters you.-Buddy Love is a rainbow that says God is with you.-Xian Love is the wind wrapping its coldness around me.-LeiloaTime
Time is numbers. It never ends- Mckenna Time is a butterfly that is in a never ending cycle.-Kyra Time is recess because you get to spend time with your friends.-Makana Time is gold because you treasure it.-Aleiya Time is a cheetah going so fast.-Nalu Time is a clock ticking tick tock, tick, tock.-AuliilaniFriendship
Friendship is a warm never ending cup of noodles-Chirs Friendship is a boat and your friend is a sail.-Mia Friendship is your house door always welcoming.-Travis Friendship is grass, it is always growing.-Jenny Friendship is a favorite toy that you can keep forever.-CherelleAnger
Anger is a black cloud on recess time. It makes me angry that we have indoor recess.-Naniloa Anger is a lemon. It makes everything sour.-Davin Anger is Pele the lava that destroys all the crop.-Ka’ai Anger is a dark cloud.-Jake
These are all great metaphors.
4th grade is the best!!!
Wow! These are fabulous! We could turn these into a digital book in technology class….