READ THE SAMPLE SENTENCES BELOW AND IDENTIFY THE PROBLEM:
1) By adding a conjunction, it extends the sentence and makes it feel longer.
2) By using it, it shows that irresponsible power is poison.
3) By showing what she was before, then what she changed to, it shows how drastic her transformation was.
4) By Welty’s language used, she was able to convey the intensity and value of her experiences.