Boss of the Food
April 30th, 2009 by
caikeda
Before time, everytime my sista like be the boss
of the food. We stay shopping in Mizuno Superette
and my madda pull the Oreos off the shelf
and my sista already saying, Mommy,
can be the boss of the Oreos?
The worse was when she was the boss
of the sunflower seeds.
She give me and my other sistas
one seed at a time.
We no could eat the meat.
Us had to put um in one pile on one Kleenex
Then, when we wen’ take all the meat
out of the shells and our lips stay all cho-cho,
she give us the seeds one at a time,
’cause my sista, she the boss
of the sunflower seeds.
One time she was the boss
of the Raisinets.
Us was ridingĀ in the back
of my granpa’s Bronco down Kaunakakai wharf.
There she was, passing us one
Raisinet at a time.
My mouth was all watery
’cause I like eat um all one time, eh?
So I wen’ tell her, Gimme that bag.
And I wen’ grab um.
She said, I’ng tell mommy.
And I said, Go you bird killa; tell mommy.
She wen’ let go the bag.
And I wen’ start eating
the Raisinets all one time.
But when I wen’ look at her,
I felt kinda bad cause I wen’ call her bird killa.
She was boss of the parakeet too, eh,
and she suppose to cover the cage every night.
But one time, she wen’ forget.
When us wake up, the bugga was on its back,
legs in the air all stiff.
The bugga was cold.
And I guess the thin that made me feel bad
was I neva think calling her bird killa
would make her feel so bad
that she let go the bag Raisinets.
But I neva give her back the bag.
I figga, ehh. . .
I ain’t going suffer
eating one Raisinet at a time.
Then beg her for one mo
and I mean one mo
fricken candy.
–Lois-Ann Yamanaka, Growing Up Local
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September 18th, 2009 at 5:23 pm
We saw this in my creative writing class during my senior year of high school. I don’t see why people think it’s so genius. Maybe it’s because it’s memorable and makes people feel something, but it wasn’t well-written and it sounds mean-spirited (even though she mentions having felt bad) and makes her come off looking nasty, trashy, and negative. I don’t know whether that’s the image she wants to present of herself.
She succeeded in invoking emotion and making the poem memorable, but I don’t feel that this poem is up to standard for poetry and I don’t feel that it contributes something positive to poetry or to society in general.
September 23rd, 2009 at 7:23 am
I think you’ve hit on some reasons why literature is so powerful. Each person has their own definition of literature and what literature should do for them as a reader in order for it to be valuable, more so with poetry. It’s also interesting to find out why your high school teacher used this poem in class. What was the teacher’s intent? As a writer myself, I know that poetry is not written with the high school creative writing teacher in mind. What teachers use the pieces for is not always linked to the reason why the piece must be written by the author. Great conversation! Mahalo.